pretty nice. fav

Another excellent piece. May I ask if you could take a look at my own lineart work in my gallery. It's entitled "Smexy-kun". I'd appreciate some feedback on it. Great job. Keep up the good work.

I like it a lot. I love that lines... simples and precises.

these look really nice. clean lines!

Nice clean lines. If I were to offer a critique, I'd say to try to keep your line weight more consistent. You're going from like 1-2 pixels to 5-6 randomly throughout the drawing. Also, I'd go easy on the detail lines. A lot of them aren't necessary, specifically the ones around the knees, on the insides of the elbows and the lines between the teeth. The ones on the teeth kind of make it look like she's got gaps there. You can imply those kinds of subtle lines by drawing the beginning and end of the line but leaving the space in between blank. The viewer's eye will fill in the rest, and you'll get a much cleaner, gentler look. All in all though, you've got nice form and your lineart is coming along nicely. Good work.

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Thanks for the critique, valid comments, cheers. Which do you prefer out of the two if you dont mind asking?

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hmm that's a tough one. I like the folds in the pillow and the hair in number 2, but I like the layout of 1 a lot more...it's softer. And technically speaking, I think it's just a better piece. It seems to have more feeling, seems more natural than the second. She doesn't look like she's posing in the first.

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I have to say this is better than part 1. Especially the hair seems much more better.
Flatness of line drawing style really does not make justice to anatomy. But the feeling and female mood is perhaps what is the purpose of the picture after all.